🧵 Writers: Want your stories to leap off the page? Here’s a classic trick the pros use—MASTER THE 5 SENSES! Inspired by ep. 374 of the ā€œTell The Damn Storyā€ podcast, let’s break down why engaging ALL your senses can instantly level up your writing šŸ‘‡ #WritingCommunity #amwriting

1ļøāƒ£ Why Bother With Senses?
Every detail you drop—what your characters see, hear, taste, touch, or smell—brings your world to life. It’s the fast lane to reader immersion. Think goosebumps during a thriller or that ā€œhere with themā€ feeling during heartfelt scenes.

2ļøāƒ£ Sight:
Describe more than ā€œwhat’s there.ā€ Maybe it’s ā€œher dangling earrings gleaming at the subway stopā€ or ā€œtattoos so detailed the eye gets lost.ā€ Let readers SEE what matters—and sometimes hint at hidden meanings! #writingtips

3ļøāƒ£ Sound:
Don’t just use dialogue. Can your readers hear the ā€œcreak of wood in a dark house,ā€ the ā€œclick of a six-gun hammer,ā€ or distant, mysterious rain? Sounds quickly set a mood or crank up the suspense.

4ļøāƒ£ Smell:
Criminally underrated. One co-host brought us to an African riverbank full of wildebeest carcasses—stench so thick it ā€œalmost smothers you.ā€ Smell is memory’s trigger: perfume, old cigars, fresh bread—instant nostalgia, dread, or comfort.

5ļøāƒ£ Taste:
Food is emotion. A blueberry pie can be ā€œNirvanaā€ā€”but under tension, even turkey can taste bitter. Context is everything. Use taste to reveal mood, character, or backstory (a recipe for heartbreak or bliss).

6ļøāƒ£ Touch:
The pressure of a handshake, the gentleness of a mother’s touch, the way a punch lands—actions reveal relationships. Describe sensations, don’t just tell what happened: ā€œcalloused palms,ā€ ā€œa warmth that lingers," or "an icy grip of dread."

7ļøāƒ£ Pro Tip:
You don’t have to squeeze all 5 senses into every scene—but do a ā€œsense checkā€ on revision. Where does one extra detail make a moment POP or add tension? A quick tweak = massive payoff!

8ļøāƒ£ Bonus:
Plan ahead! Foreshadow with senses (ā€œthe taste of joy becomes ash later,ā€ ā€œperfume that’s sweet at first, haunting after lossā€). Use sensory callbacks for gut-punches.

šŸ“š Next time you edit, ask:
What does my hero see, hear, smell, taste, & touch RIGHT NOW? Where can I go deeper?

šŸ”” Hit LIKE if you’re ready to supercharge your stories.
🫐 P.S. If you now crave blueberry pie, blame ā€œTell The Damn Story.ā€ #storytelling

What’s YOUR go-to sense in writing? Drop your spiciest examples below! šŸ‘‡šŸ–Šļø

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