TELL THE DAMN STORY, ep 341: Beyond "Said": Power Words, Crafting Impactful and Natural Dialogue

This week, we're exploring the art and power of words and how they shape our stories and bring our characters to life. Cohosts Chris Ryan and Alex Simmons have been writing for over 30 years, and today, they're sharing insights on everything from detective tales to sci-fi adventures. We’ll discuss the meticulous process of crafting dialogue and ensuring each character has a unique voice inspired by the greats like Joss Whedon. We also share valuable editing tips from the renowned Art Taylor and humorous anecdotes—like a mishap with macaroni and cheese—that remind us all of the spice that life—and words—bring to our storytelling. Join us as we walk through the essential stages of drafting, from getting that rough first draft done to polishing your fourth draft for publication. We’ll explore the importance of avoiding word repetition, making the most of sensory details, and drawing from real-life experiences to enrich your narratives. Whether you are an aspiring writer or a seasoned storyteller, this episode is packed with practical advice and inspiration to fuel your creative journey. Have any questions, comments, or suggestions? Then please leave them in the Comments Section. Write: TTDSOnAir@gmail.com And follow us on ... ⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠@Tell The Damn Story⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠ ⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠ www.TellTheDamnStory.com www.Facebook.com/Tell The Damn Story⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠ ⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠ If you're enjoying these episodes, please take a moment to help wet our whistle by clicking on the ⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠Buy Me A Coffee⁠⁠⁠⁠link! https://www.buymeacoffee.com/tellthedamnstory 00:00 Discussing writing process: drafts and word choice. 03:50 Polishing 4th draft to improve the story's appeal. 07:36 Masterclass emphasizes action over endless refinement. 11:06 Complete draft, then polish thoroughly before submitting. 14:48 Embrace doubt, seek knowledge, and enhance your writing. 17:23 Words paint vivid images for readers' imagination. 20:06 Don McGregor designed Wakanda's realistic geographic structure. 25:54 Refine dialogue and character consistency in drafts. 27:13 Balanced character dialogue in Buffy script. 30:48 Imagine respecting characters: commitment enriches storytelling. 35:36 Contextual use of "antiseptic" is vital in storytelling. 38:10 Incorporate multiple senses beyond sight and sound. 40:29 Heightened awareness and discomfort during uncertain situations. 43:04 Exciting new content is coming; listen to Halloween.⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠

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